Review: The Element of Fire

The Element of Fire by Martha Wells
My rating: 0 of 5 stars

I've tried to read this twice now. The first time, I bounced off the complex setup and wordy descriptions early on, and set it aside for several years. The second time, I made it about halfway through before deciding that I just didn't care about the characters enough to trudge through the kind of tragic war story that I don't enjoy in order to find what happened to them. There are clear hints of two of the characters ending up together, but I didn't much like either of them or think they would be a good couple, so that didn't motivate me either.

My issues were mainly with the setting: a decadent court with a weak king, where the Queen Mother makes most of the effective decisions, and the king's older cousin is clearly the villain. Practically everyone, including one of the two main characters (the captain of the queen's guard), sleeps around constantly as if relationships don't matter even a little bit, and that alone made it not the book for me, even before the violence and gore and meaningless death of innocents really started to kick in. (To be fair, at least in the first half, we're only told, not shown, that the captain is promiscuous; we don't see him with anyone, even the widowed queen, his main lover.)

The two main characters, the captain and the king's older-but-illegitimate half-sister, do seem to be trying to do the right thing in a dark world, but... it wasn't enough for me.

It's well written for the kind of book it is; it just happens that I don't care for that kind of book. It's from the 1990s, meaning it's been scanned and run through OCR, meaning that there are quite a few small typos and misreadings, because publishers seldom do a thorough enough job of cleaning up the books they publish that way. (It's difficult work - I used to do it, and OCR doesn't seem to have improved much in the intervening 30 years, oddly.)

Not for me, might be for you.

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